Every SCREENWRITER needs a super detailed SCRIPT ANALYSIS in Colorado Springs, Colorado For Sale
Have you written a fairly good screenplay, but are afraid to get it out to people because you know it needs improvement?
I'm a Screenwriter in Hollywood who's sold five screenplays and I offer an in-depth scene-by-scene analysis of your screenplay. I give you an overall analysis, then I lead you through each scene to find what works and what needs improvement through story, plot, character, dialogue, description, structure, conflict, goals, motivation, tone, inner/external conflict, etc. I even rewrite a bit of description and dialogue here and there to give an example on how it can be improved.
For the past couple years I've been writing and rewriting feature-length screenplays for writers, actors, directors, and producers.
I've worked on writing or rewriting over 30 screenplays to date and I've read over 3,000 screenplays as a script analyst and for screenwriting contests.
SCREENPLAY ANALYSIS RESULTS: I did an extremely detailed analysis of a script for a writer and they won $10,000 in the L.A. Comedy Scripts Screenplay Competition. I spent an hour and a half on their first page alone to help smooth out the kinks. I also analyzed a script for a writer then helped them rewrite the dialogue and they recently acquired one million dollars toward making their film. I did an analysis for a director and helped rewrite the screenplay and that script was recently shot and is in post. And finally, I performed an analysis for a writer who has written movies that have made in the 100s of millions of dollars. He was a comedy writer struggling with the plotting of a hard-boiled thriller and I set him on the right track.
I charge $250.00 for an extremely comprehensive script analysis. I accept PayPal (pay half up front and the other half after you receive your analysis). I also write and rewrite feature-length screenplays for clients.
Why have a person who has never written a screenplay before review your script? On average it takes 1-2 full days to complete an analysis.
SAMPLES OF MY DETAILED SCRIPT COVERAGE:
https://www.box.com/s/251cee62d87f4ef81de8
https://www.box.com/s/c9ebd78e38bafxxxxfde
SAMPLES OF MY SCREENWRITING:
Action Military Scene in Iraq:
https://www.box.com/s/8a458b7bxxxxxxxxab8a
Dramatic Birthday Scene:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxx0fac00d8a8a95a70
Tense Opening During Cold War In Soviet Union:
https://www.box.com/s/21cxxxx32cbxxxxd9f71
High Octane Opening During NASCAR Race:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxxd9bd9b01d25a12be
MORE INFORMATION ABOUT MY WRITING SERVICES:
https://www.box.com/s/xxxxa993cbe0ac7f32b4
REFERENCES AND RESUME:
https://www.box.com/s/3da1e41b255cxxxxd874
MY INTERNET MOVIE DATABASE (IMDB) PAGE:
http://www.imdb.com/name/nmxxxx241/
FORMAT: I work from your PDF, Word, or Final Draft files.
Contact me today. My analysis will give you the tools to improve your screenplay.
Dan